Animal town

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story.

What I like about my writing is it had lots of describing words.

I need to improve on writing more.

Here is my writing about Animal Town.

When I went to animal town I saw a crazy fluffy police chimpanzee sitting on a shiny bright blue chair. After I saw the chimpanzee I saw a giraffe who had a very long neck. After I saw the giraffe I saw a lazy black and white striped zebra walking across the road. After I saw a zebra I saw a funny looking bear with pointy ears in the van. Meerkats are a funny looking animal, when something goes wrong the Meerkat makes noises. The Meerkats are like an alarm. Animal town was so fun.